Tuesday, May 17, 2011

The scary things are

The scary thing is
that if I had a gun,
I could have been gone with one pull of the trigger
if I had a razor,
The pool of blood could have gotten bigger and bigger
if you hadn't noticed
I would have been covered in scars
If she didn't stop me
I would have run through the cars
If there was no tomorrow
There would be no way to hope
If I didn't cut
There would be no way to cope
If there was someone to trust
I would be better
If I had someone to talk to
My face wouldn't be wetter
If he didn't leave me
I wouldn't have cried
If you had loved me
I wouldn't have died
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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 18, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    If this is how you feel know your not alone and that people care about you

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  2. sacofumdMay 18, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    that comment was by me

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  3. maryMay 19, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    this is really good. and really sad. smile love. youre worth it.

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  4. Last resortSeptember 7, 2011 at 10:45 AM

    This is one of the most beautiful poems ever, and I was wondering if I could Use this poem In my English project as we are doing poem anthology. That's If you don't mind other people seeing it in my school and me trying to annotate it. "/

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  5. JillianSeptember 7, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    Thank you for saying its beautiful :). And, Sure you can use this poem, but don't show my whole blog, just the poem please :). Good luck on your english project!

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  6. Last resortSeptember 10, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Thank you soooo much (it'll only be this poem) and i'm sure it'll be good with your poem in it! ^_^

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